Story writing

In the class of language we were asked to write a story and to use and underline:
-Five connectors
-Three sequence marks
-Two examples of direct speech
We were given a prompt sentence that was "Mark couldn`t believe his good luck".

Mark couldn`t believe his good luck, first he won a trip to New Zeleand, in addition he won 1 million dollars in the lotery. After that he decided to go to a biongo due to his good luck. He went to the bingo and started playing . Subsequently he started talking to a guy:
"How are you doing?", the man said.
"Pretty good, I will win this, and you?", Mark said.
"Not so good, but I have a chance, good luck", he said.
"Thank you, the same for you", Mark regret.

Consequently, they stoped talking and continued playing. Ten minutes pass and finally Mark shouted:
"Bingo!, I am very lucky"
"Yes you are!", the man said.
"I won again, see you in the next one", Mark said. Mark recived his prize that was a nice car and went back home.